out of thoughts?
maybe i am..........
thinking the world is animalistic.......
an out of control ram..........
ready to crush,hurt and detest
and accusing whom
yes,yes
another man!
thinking the world is animalistic
an out of control ram
"he cheated me"', "he broke my faith"
"he hurt me", "he lied"
finds a million reasons........
to create a sham!
thinking the world is animalistic
an out of control ram
anger is a demon
and its fury is broken faith
refusing to let go.........
caught in a devastating jam
thinking the world is animalistic
an out of control ram
call the world an arian
call the world a ram
mark each human............
with the image of the animal man
thinking the world is animalistic
an out of control ram
2 comments:
Impressive. Need to pay a lil attention to detail(like spellos).
Jus a suggestion... You can give your title a second look. Sounds too basic.
Keep it rollin;)
sounds a bit abstract, an art
which is oblivious these days.
overall raw depiction of thoughts.
Ver different 4rm tht one in the profile.
good penmanship.
cheers !
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